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« on: December 27, 2007, 03:59:14 PM » |
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I lost my thunder with the other design. I liked it because it was unique but it didn't have any real pizzazz. However I feel this this one has some potential.
The picture, while totally awesome, is just a demonstration of what I can do. I was thinking we could use a picture of deka! sporting some fancy pants. I might make the pic look like a pencil sketch.
I chose that picture because of the pants and because the focus of the picture fit perfectly with the design. There was just the right margin of whitespace type stuff on the left to fit in.
I'm not completely happy with the color scheme. And I'd like to revise it.
I REALLY need outside perspective in the form of comments and suggestions. I've been working on this design for to long and not much inspiration has come to me.
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alphadecka
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« Reply #1 on: December 27, 2007, 04:48:18 PM » |
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nice!
i will sport some pinstripes, and take a pic. it looks real good
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Labyrinthine
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« Reply #2 on: December 27, 2007, 04:54:56 PM » |
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I like what you have going, but it's mushy.
I absolutely adore the navigation area. It's separate, succinct, definite, and easy to understand/navigate.
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I am not drawn to any specific part of the page in the content area; my eyes just wander over the whole thing.
Yeah. After about 30 seconds of really trying to concentrate on something in the content area, I just couldn't. You need to do something to the individual content blocks to bring them out, like you've done with the navigation area.
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Jedakiah
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« Reply #3 on: December 27, 2007, 07:02:47 PM » |
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I like what you have going, but it's mushy.
I absolutely adore the navigation area. It's separate, succinct, definite, and easy to understand/navigate.
but
I am not drawn to any specific part of the page in the content area; my eyes just wander over the whole thing.
Yeah. After about 30 seconds of really trying to concentrate on something in the content area, I just couldn't. You need to do something to the individual content blocks to bring them out, like you've done with the navigation area.
Thank you Laby. I get what you're saying and I'm going to try and fix it. I think I was trying to meld an idea I got from this design and the original version. It turned out poorly. |
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Jedakiah
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« Reply #4 on: January 12, 2008, 06:26:02 PM » |
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BTW sir, I know it looks like I don't come around here at all anymore. But I'll notice when you post a pic.
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« Reply #6 on: February 10, 2008, 05:20:18 PM » |
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yes he does....
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« Reply #7 on: February 10, 2008, 11:00:59 PM » |
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jed, i'm gonna say, i'm tired of getting emails from your domain about all natural enhancement. if they don't stop, i'm gonna have you assassinated.
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Jedakiah
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« Reply #8 on: February 11, 2008, 03:09:16 AM » |
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You see that's just it. It actually is all natural. The competition just makes claims. But with us you don't even have to take pills. We just teach you how to focus all yer energy on blocking the dark chi surrounding your wanger. It's amazing really, the results are fantabulous, even in cold water!
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« Reply #9 on: February 11, 2008, 04:56:51 AM » |
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GO TO BED JED.
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« Reply #10 on: February 11, 2008, 11:44:38 AM » |
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« Reply #11 on: February 11, 2008, 08:04:42 PM » |
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DONT CENSOR JEDD!
YOURE ALL A BUNCH OF COMMUNISTS!
*pants pics coming soon!*
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« Reply #12 on: February 11, 2008, 08:21:52 PM » |
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DONT CENSOR JEDD!
YOURE ALL A BUNCH OF COMMUNISTS!
*pants pics coming soon!*
Sorry. It's just that I don't want no talk of dark chi and my wanger goin on. Everything down at the south pole is perfectly fine at the moment, dark chi and light chi would just make things more chiish. |
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« Reply #13 on: February 11, 2008, 11:22:32 PM » |
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DONT CENSOR JEDD!
YOURE ALL A BUNCH OF COMMUNISTS!
*pants pics coming soon!*
Sorry. It's just that I don't want no talk of dark chi and my wanger goin on. Everything down at the south pole is perfectly fine at the moment, dark chi and light chi would just make things more chiish. you must have used a lot if yours is down at the south pole, mines just at the equator. |
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Jedakiah
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« Reply #14 on: February 11, 2008, 11:38:50 PM » |
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DONT CENSOR JEDD!
YOURE ALL A BUNCH OF COMMUNISTS!
*pants pics coming soon!*
I'm glad you're defending free speech Deka. But Jamin was right, I was running on giggles and a cup of coffee. Not a good thing at 3-4 in the morning when you have access to your email and all the contacts. Sorry. It's just that I don't want no talk of dark chi and my wanger goin on.
Everything down at the south pole is perfectly fine at the moment, dark chi and light chi would just make things more chiish.
And nobody blames you for that Laby. Telling me to go to bed, well that's the best advice anyone's given me in years. Back to the topic. The server admin finally fixed his end. Jedakiah.com is no more, only Enhanced Pants remains. I put up a simple page for now: Enhanced Pants: ExampleIt's surreal, it's finally happening. EDIT: BTW Free email addresses or forwards for all Enhanced members. Just let me know what you want before @enhancedpants.com. If you want a email address give me a password. Or if you want email to forward to your current email address let me know what that is. |
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